In the second body paragraph, you will choose
another symptom and different examples that show that Holden is depressed.
Another indication that Holden is depressed is when he…
Another indication that Holden is depressed is when he…
- speaks of or efforts to run away from home
- engages in self-injurious behavior.
- exhibits signs of alcohol and drug abuse.
THEN,
For example, for instance, to illustrate
First of all, To begin with,
First of all, To begin with,
OR
Holden
says, “I ordered a Scotch and soda, which is
my favorite drink, next to frozen Daiquiris. If you were only around six years
old, you could get liquor at Ernie's.” This demonstrates that he is a heavy
drinker which is self-destructive for a teenager.